I found a letter in my locker one day. Anxious to know who wrote it...it had no name, it was blank, I was excited thinking it was from the guy I liked. It expressed feelings about how he possibly felt about me, a love letter, an anonymous letter, just for me. I even could have quoted every sentence from it.
The next day, with a huge smile, I was happy as ever, went to ask him. Sadness pervaded my heart, heartbroken... it wasnt him. Every little piece of that letter was ripped apart, and so was my heart. I then knew it was just a prank from my friends. I realized I shouldnt get deeply in love for a guy that may didnt feel the same way for me, also that I shouldnt belive an anonymous letter, and start being smarter about this kind of things.
Waooo deep words! Once again I am sorry ;)
ReplyDeleteReally good! you could have put more details into it, but besides that is really good :) keep it up gurrl! jaja
ReplyDeleteSorry:( That was so mean for them to toy with your emotions.
ReplyDeleteGreat Story! I really liked it, the way I read it was smooth and fascinating. I reallly like the sentence " I could have qoute every sentence from it." It says things you didn't say, like you read it over and over agai and it meant so much for you.
ReplyDeleteFabulous Job!
ohh.. this was sad :(
ReplyDeletethis was written really well. i could picture the whole story. i'm sorry your friends did that to you.
ReplyDeleteaww poor you. that sucks but well-written. keep up the good writing !
ReplyDeleteWow those friends must be really mean... Good job girl :) keep it up! loveyouu
ReplyDeleteOooh thats sad, cruel joke. Very good story, I like how u told how u felt and the aftermath.
ReplyDeletehayyy mi dandelayon:( que tristeee.
ReplyDeletejajaj i really did say llike "aaaaaaay" jajajaja. great story(Y)
alexa! JAJAJAJJAJAJ
ReplyDeleteWow...I feel bad. I would be so crushed if that ever happened to me. The way you incorporated your feelings into the story is what made it really stand out! Nice Job!
ReplyDeletewow im soo sorry for what happend that sucks, well good confession i liked it a lot.
ReplyDeleteI really like your story it showed a lots of emotions that actually really made me feel how you were feeling. I'm really sorry that happened to you :'( nice story:)
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