Danelia Martinez
666 Blue Lane
Johannesburg, South Africa
September 8, 2010
Dear Laura,
How are you? I am writing to let you know all the about school and gossip to get you instilled in school. Hope you enjoy my letter, and write back if possible.
You know yesterday I met a girl that has anthologies just like you, you would love her, she was great. I was thinking to encompass her in our sleep over for when you come. Something you may not like about here is your soon to be classmates disposition to argue, gets really annoying. But we can always extricate all those things easily.
Also everything here is quite different from Los Santos, but we can modify some things. Here it's prevalent that kids underage drink alcohol, but I don't, so don't worry. Well I hope you'll be just as excited as I am.
Your friend,
Danelya the Dandelion.
Nice friendly letter to Laura. Just a couple grammar mistakes, "all that things easily" that should be those. And its should have an apostrophe. Other than that, Good use of WW words! Good job! Keep it up. Thanks for commenting on my blog! :)
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